Korektoj

Text from Brocky - English

    • A New high school in my community.

  • The promt: It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community.
    • Do you support or oppose this plan? Why?
  • Use specific reasons and details in your answer.
    • Studying is vital for the society, and it will help in raising an educative community which will improve the condition of life for the people who are living in it.
  • In my opinion, building a new high school in my community is very important for two main reasons.
    • The first reason is that it will assure of allowing the majority of the students to have a chance of studying in high school, and benefiting from free schooling in order to develop the society for an ideal community.
  • For example, when I was studying in high school 7 years ago, it was hard for me to travel from my house every day in order to reach the bus station on time, so I could attend my classes on time.
    • Otherwise I drop classes on that day.
  • It contributed also in adding more pressure on me and other students.
    • Unfourtenately, it caused many students to abondon studying because of these harsh condtions that we were facing.
    • On the other hand, if we had a high school in our community, we wouldn't need to get up early, nor students would drop their classes because of these hard situations.
    • As you can see, having a new school in my community would be a wonderful solution for stoping students from droping their classes and providing for them the best conditions for study.
    • The second reason is it will help students to improve their grades and to take advantage on the time that they use to travel while studying away from their local community.
    • Because instead of getting up two hours ahead of normal students who are living near the high school. it would be an ideal timing for them to prepare for their classes and review their notes in order to perform well in their exams.
    • For instance, when I used to study in my high school that was about an hour away from my home, I had to sleep early every day in order to get up early, so I will not miss the bus to arrive on time in school.
  • I had a limited schedule which restricted me from playing and hanging out with my friends in my community.
    • Because usually I come back fatigue from school and I would just rest for a while, and review my classes at night and then sleep early because of the tirsom that I had from traveling.
    • As you can see, having a new school in my community would definitely be an ideal solution for helping students to perform well on their exams, and stop dropped their classes due to the harsh conditions they may have during studying away from their local community.
    • To sum it up, it is a must for parents to enssure a bright future for their childrens, and one of the solutions is that by making sure that their children are studying in a near school to their houses, so they would invest the majority of their timing in studying and review for their classes.
    • Especially for those who are lacking high school in their local community, it is necessary for them to accept building a new high school so their children would have a better education and thus a bright future.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Studying is vital for the society, and it will help in raising an educative community which will improve the condition of life for the people who are living in it.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Studying is vital for thea society, and it will help in raising an educative community which will improve the condition of life for the people who are living in it.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
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    • The first reason is that it will assure of allowing the majority of the students to have a chance of studying in high school, and benefiting from free schooling in order to develop the society for an ideal community.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The first reason is that it (will assure of allowing) the majority of the students to have a chance of studying in high school, and benefiting from free schooling in order to develop the society for an ideal community.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • For example, when I was studying in high school 7 years ago, it was hard for me to travel from my house every day in order to reach the bus station on time, so I could attend my classes on time.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
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    • On the other hand, if we had a high school in our community, we wouldn't need to get up early, nor students would drop their classes because of these hard situations.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • On the other hand,But if we had a high school in our community, we wouldn't need to get up early, norand students wouldn't need to drop their classes because of these hard situations.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11
  • Frazo 12
    • As you can see, having a new school in my community would be a wonderful solution for stoping students from droping their classes and providing for them the best conditions for study.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • As you can see, having a new school in my community would be a wonderful solution forto stoping students from having to droping their classes and providing for them the best conditions forto study.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
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    • The second reason is it will help students to improve their grades and to take advantage on the time that they use to travel while studying away from their local community.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The second reason is that it will help students to improve their grades and to take advantage on the time that they use to travel while studying away from their local community.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13
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    • Because instead of getting up two hours ahead of normal students who are living near the high school. it would be an ideal timing for them to prepare for their classes and review their notes in order to perform well in their exams.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Because instead of getting up two hours ahead of normal students who are living near the high school., it would be an ideal timing for them to prepare for their classes and review their notes in order to perform well ion their exams.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14
  • Frazo 15
    • For instance, when I used to study in my high school that was about an hour away from my home, I had to sleep early every day in order to get up early, so I will not miss the bus to arrive on time in school.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • For instance, when I used to study in mygo to the high school that was about an hour away from my home, I had to sleep early every day in order to get up early, so I will noouldn't miss the bus to arrive on time in schoolat school in time.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15
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    • Because usually I come back fatigue from school and I would just rest for a while, and review my classes at night and then sleep early because of the tirsom that I had from traveling.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Because usually I come back fatigue from school exhausted and I would just rest for a while, and review my classes at night and then sleep early because of the tirsom that I habeing tired from traveling that day.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 17ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 17
  • Frazo 18
    • As you can see, having a new school in my community would definitely be an ideal solution for helping students to perform well on their exams, and stop dropped their classes due to the harsh conditions they may have during studying away from their local community.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • As you can see, having a new school in my community would definitely be an ideal solution forto helping students to perform well on their exams, and sso they don't have top dropped their classes due to the harsh conditions they may havexperience during studying awayfar from their local community.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 18ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 18
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    • To sum it up, it is a must for parents to enssure a bright future for their childrens, and one of the solutions is that by making sure that their children are studying in a near school to their houses, so they would invest the majority of their timing in studying and review for their classes.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • To sum it up, it is a must for parents to enssure a bright future for their childrens, and one of the solutions is that byo makinge sure that their children are studying in a near school near to their housesme, so they would invest the majority of their timing in studying and previewparing for their classes.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 19ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 19
  • Frazo 20
    • Especially for those who are lacking high school in their local community, it is necessary for them to accept building a new high school so their children would have a better education and thus a bright future.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Especially for those who are lacking a high school in their local community, it is necessary for them to accept building a new high school so their children would have a better education and thus a brighter future. ¶
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 20ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 20