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BANTU BUAT PEMBETULAN SEKARANG!Dibetulkan

Teks daripada saramilly - English

    • write an email about a 2 day tour in a capital

  • Hi Mark! How are you?
    • I am planning a 2 days tour in Paris, the capital of the France, I would like to go when there is the Paris fashion week because i love fashion. paris is certanly famous fot the Eiffel Tower, the Louvre mouseum, in wich there's the Monnalisa painting, the Palace of Versailles and the Arc de Thriomphe.
    • The actraction that i most want to visit is the Louvre museum because i love art and i think that it is one of the most beautiful and interesting museum in the world.
    • The second day i would like to visit the Palace of Versailles, it is a 1650 royal palace. i would love the hall of mirrorsand the extraordinary gardens!
    • So this is my plan, would you came with me?

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

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    • I am planning a 2 days tour in Paris, the capital of the France, I would like to go when there is the Paris fashion week because i love fashion. paris is certanly famous fot the Eiffel Tower, the Louvre mouseum, in wich there's the Monnalisa painting, the Palace of Versailles and the Arc de Thriomphe.
      Undi sekarang!
    • I am planning a 2 days tour in Paris, the capital of the France, I would like to go when there is the Paris fashion week is held because i love fashion. pParis is certainly famous fotr the Eiffel Tower, the Louvre mouseum, in wich twhere's the Monnalisa painting is displayed, the Palace of Versailles and the Arc de Thriomphe.
      lefthandedlefthanded profile picture Ulasan
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
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    • The actraction that i most want to visit is the Louvre museum because i love art and i think that it is one of the most beautiful and interesting museum in the world.
      Undi sekarang!
    • The actraction that i most wantlike to visit is the Louvre museum because i love art and i think that it is one of the most beautiful and interesting museums in the world.
      lefthandedlefthanded profile picture Ulasan
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
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    • The second day i would like to visit the Palace of Versailles, it is a 1650 royal palace. i would love the hall of mirrorsand the extraordinary gardens!
      Undi sekarang!
    • The second day iI would like to visit the Palace of Versailles, it is a 1650 royal palace from 1650. iI would love to see the hall of mirrors and the extraordinary gardens!
      SirExoticSirExotic profile picture Ulasan
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
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