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    • write an email about a 2 day tour in a capital

  • Hi Mark! How are you?
    • I am planning a 2 days tour in Paris, the capital of the France, I would like to go when there is the Paris fashion week because i love fashion. paris is certanly famous fot the Eiffel Tower, the Louvre mouseum, in wich there's the Monnalisa painting, the Palace of Versailles and the Arc de Thriomphe.
    • The actraction that i most want to visit is the Louvre museum because i love art and i think that it is one of the most beautiful and interesting museum in the world.
    • The second day i would like to visit the Palace of Versailles, it is a 1650 royal palace. i would love the hall of mirrorsand the extraordinary gardens!
    • So this is my plan, would you came with me?

Пожалуйста, помогите исправить все предложения. - English