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My answer on question "Why I want to start my career in TBI?"

• I was attracted working conditions and corporate policies in TBI.

• I'd like to work in company, when I can progress and I think TBI perfect choice to make that.

• I promoted one of products of TBI therefore I know what consumers need.

• Also this experience brings me an opportunity to estimate the situation inside.