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Сообщение от VickyVenz - English

  • My answer on question "Why I want to start my career in TBI?"

    • I was attracted working conditions and corporate policies in TBI.
    • I'd like to work in company, when I can progress and I think TBI perfect choice to make that.
    • I promoted one of products of TBI therefore I know what consumers need.
    • Also this experience brings me an opportunity to estimate the situation inside.

Пожалуйста, помогите исправить все предложения. - English