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- Right, I'm Jocelyn, i'm a french fifteen-year-boy, I live in Normandy since 15years...
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- Right, I'm Jocelyn, i'm a fFrench fifteen-year-boy, I have lived in Normandy ~~since~~for 15 years~~...~~
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- ( LOL ) I wanna to find a boy who wanna learn me English :D
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- ( LOL ) I wanna to find a boy who wannats to teach me / help me to learn me/ English :D
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- ( LOL ) I wanna to find a boy who w~~anna learn~~ould like to teach me English :D
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