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Usual day
- After breakfast I went to swim by a boat with other 4 person.
- I had a good time.
- It was an interesting and funny.
- I also jumped into the river and tried to swim near the our sailing boat.
- I ate soup, porridge,meat, tomato on the dinner.
- Then I cast the knives in the trees and improved a swimming technique.
- In the evening I watched a great film which called "The Karate Kid".
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