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  • Usual day

    • After breakfast I went to swim by a boat with other 4 person.
  • I had a good time.
    • It was an interesting and funny.
    • I also jumped into the river and tried to swim near the our sailing boat.
    • I ate soup, porridge,meat, tomato on the dinner.
  • Then I cast the knives in the trees and improved a swimming technique.
    • In the evening I watched a great film which called "The Karate Kid".

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