Nhờ sửa bài giúp

Giúp sửa lỗi ngay!Đã sửa

Văn bản từ Englishfun - English

    • Electroni components : Difficulty of recycle and pollution

    • The increase of the electronic equipment which contain microelectronics components generate a multiplication of electronic wastes.
    • With a lifespan of more and more short the electronic objects are leading to around tens tons of wastes over the world every years.
    • This mountain of wastes could increase about 30% from now to 2017 and weight 65.4 million tons per years.
    • The question of these electronics wastes is worrying: on the one hand by their exponential numbers and on the other hand by the difficulty to recycle them.
  • They actually have important ecological imprint because of quantities of resources in water, metals and energy for their conception, fabrication, transport, use and recycle of electronic components.
    • They contains dangerous elements or metals for the environment.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • The increase of the electronic equipment which contain microelectronics components generate a multiplication of electronic wastes.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The increase of the electronic equipment which contain microelectronics components that generate a multiplication of electronic wastes.
      t2thea2themt2thea2them profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The increase of the electronic equipment which contains microelectronics components generate a multiplication of electronic wastes.
      hollishollis profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The increase of the electronic equipment which containing microelectronics' components generate a multiplicmultiplies the generation of electronic wastes.
      AnthonyCastleAnthonyCastle profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • With a lifespan of more and more short the electronic objects are leading to around tens tons of wastes over the world every years.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • With a lifespan of more and morethat gets shorter, the electronic objects are leading to around tens tons of wastes over the world every years.
      t2thea2themt2thea2them profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • With aA decreasing lifespan of more and more short the electronic objects are leading to aroundelectronic devices results in a worldwide accumulation of tens of tons of wastes over the world every per years.
      AnthonyCastleAnthonyCastle profile picture Comments
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • This mountain of wastes could increase about 30% from now to 2017 and weight 65.4 million tons per years.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • This mountain of wastes could increase about 30% from now to 2017 and increase by a weight of 65.4 million tons per years.
      t2thea2themt2thea2them profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • This mountain of wastes could increase about 30% from now tot a yearly rate of 15 % between 20175 and weight2017 which translates into 65.4 million tons per years.
      AnthonyCastleAnthonyCastle profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • The question of these electronics wastes is worrying: on the one hand by their exponential numbers and on the other hand by the difficulty to recycle them.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The question of theseissue of electronics wastes is worrying: on the one hand by their exponential numbers and on the other hand by thea source of concern due to both its exponential growth and increasing difficulty to recycle ithem.
      AnthonyCastleAnthonyCastle profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • They actually have important ecological imprint because of quantities of resources in water, metals and energy for their conception, fabrication, transport, use and recycle of electronic components.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • They contains dangerous elements or metals for the environment.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • They contains dangerous elements or metals for theIn addition, it is well known that some microelectronic components contain chemical compounds and heavy metals that are a clear environmental hazard.
      AnthonyCastleAnthonyCastle profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6