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Overall, the number...
- Overall, the number of students attends school because of career falls sharply by different age groups, whereas deciding to keep studying depending on their interests by far increases considerably.
- We can also see that the majority of employers mainly concentrates on supporting students aged under 26.

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- Overall, the number of students attends school because of career falls sharply by different age groups, whereas deciding to keep studying depending on their interests by far increases considerably.
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- Overall, the number of students who attends school ~~because of~~due to focusing on their career falls sharply by different age groups, whereas deciding to keep studying, depending on their interests, by far increases considerably.
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- We can also see that the majority of employers mainly concentrates on supporting students aged under 26.
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- We can also see that the majority of employers mainly concentrates on supporting students aged under 26.
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  Αναφορά ως ανεπιθύμητο;
  
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- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 2