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  • Overall, the number...

    • Overall, the number of students attends school because of career falls sharply by different age groups, whereas deciding to keep studying depending on their interests by far increases considerably.
    • We can also see that the majority of employers mainly concentrates on supporting students aged under 26.

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    • Overall, the number of students attends school because of career falls sharply by different age groups, whereas deciding to keep studying depending on their interests by far increases considerably.
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    • Overall, the number of students who attends school because ofdue to focusing on their career falls sharply by different age groups, whereas deciding to keep studying, depending on their interests, by far increases considerably.
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    • We can also see that the majority of employers mainly concentrates on supporting students aged under 26.
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    • We can also see that the majority of employers mainly concentrates on supporting students aged under 26.
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