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Hello everyone!
Hello everyone!
I'm 16 years old.
- I really want to learn english language, because it's so interesting to speak in other language!
- I know, my english is not very well now, but I'll try do it better.

-Tatyana-January 2015100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- Hello everyone!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
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câu 1
- Hello everyone!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- I'm 16 years old.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
câu 3
- I really want to learn english language, because it's so interesting to speak in other language!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I really want to learn eEnglish ~~language~~, because it's so interesting to speak in other language!
  minkithecat Comments
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (2 votes)
- I really want to learn eEnglish ~~language~~, because it's so interesting to speak in other languages!
  esprit5343 Comments
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (2 votes)
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
câu 4
- I know, my english is not very well now, but I'll try do it better.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I know, my eEnglish is not very well now, but I'll try to do it better.
  minkithecat Comments
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I know, my eEnglish is not very ~~well~~good now, but I'll try doto make it better [or "I'll try harder"].
  esprit5343 Comments
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (2 votes)
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4