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    • Hard work

  • Six months of hard work had finally paid off.
    • A half year ago my friend and me read in Internet about a competition.
    • We just surfed in Interned when we stopped looking on a photo.
  • The photo that illustrated a sunny beach and a luxury hotel drew our attention.
    • Under that photo was an advertisement that offered a wonderful prize for organising the best festival for young people from other coutries.
    • The winner will spend two weeks of Summer on Miami.
    • The lodging in a luxury hotel, spending time on the beach, excursions, meeting with other winners from all over the world will be free.
  • We decided to participate and win the prize that had delighted us.
    • Every weekend we were discussing the ideas and planning the evening.
    • We were enough motivated for winning.
    • We caught to think out the best things and ideas.
  • The last 2 months we were so tired that we haven't had any time and energy for school.
    • All time that we had we have spend planning the festival.
    • Eventually our teachers at school got to know that we had been organising the festival.
    • So they decided to help us.
    • Because of the help we have done all at time.
  • The festival was amazing.
  • The commission and people for whom it was organised were surprised.
  • The evening was quite well organised and everyone had good time.
    • A week after that we got a message that we are the winners.
    • We could organise the festival that everyone liked.
    • It was unbelivable moment.
    • And know we are lying on the beach in Miami and remember the last half year that we spent working hard for our goal.

ΠΑΡΑΚΑΛΟΥΜΕ, ΒΟΗΘΗΣΤΕ ΝΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΟΥΜΕ ΚΑΘΕ ΠΡΟΤΑΣΗ! - English