Text from Homkada - English
Hard work
- Six months of hard work had finally paid off.
- A half year ago my friend and me read in Internet about a competition.
- We just surfed in Interned when we stopped looking on a photo.
- The photo that illustrated a sunny beach and a luxury hotel drew our attention.
- Under that photo was an advertisement that offered a wonderful prize for organising the best festival for young people from other coutries.
- The winner will spend two weeks of Summer on Miami.
- The lodging in a luxury hotel, spending time on the beach, excursions, meeting with other winners from all over the world will be free.
- We decided to participate and win the prize that had delighted us.
- Every weekend we were discussing the ideas and planning the evening.
- We were enough motivated for winning.
- We caught to think out the best things and ideas.
- The last 2 months we were so tired that we haven't had any time and energy for school.
- All time that we had we have spend planning the festival.
- Eventually our teachers at school got to know that we had been organising the festival.
- So they decided to help us.
- Because of the help we have done all at time.
- The festival was amazing.
- The commission and people for whom it was organised were surprised.
- The evening was quite well organised and everyone had good time.
- A week after that we got a message that we are the winners.
- We could organise the festival that everyone liked.
- It was unbelivable moment.
- And know we are lying on the beach in Miami and remember the last half year that we spent working hard for our goal.
- HomkadaDecember 2014Vote now!
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