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  • A small monologue

    • I was thinking about the perception that people have in the world concerning to other people in the world.
    • More specifically, people of others countries in the world.
    • I'm an international business student; during my study process I had learned about how doing business in many countries, but also I had learned about cultures in others countries.
    • In that process, I recognized there are many lies concerning to the perception of others countries.
    • For example, -People in the world think that american people are so materialistic, with hungry for power and hungry for burgers and others things that are not totally real.
  • -The European people believe that they are a superior race, with superior things and superior language and superior bla bla bla.. and the discrimination in european countries is evident.
  • -The Asian people are the nerds of the world, their childrens born with a PC and everything that you can do it, an Asia boy can do it better than you.
  • -The African people are the poorest in the world -The Latin american people has the farming of the world where the drugs are caring to send to each country in the world.
  • And I wont write about the arabic people.
  • These are lies, bad thoughts with we are growing in ours live without stop to think . Are true?
  • Of course no !!
  • What is happening is that the bad people excel.
  • We ( the good people) are more than the bad people and we have to excel.
  • Not all European people are racist, not all American people are materialistic, not all Asian people .... not all the american people...not all the african people... NOT ALL.
  • Please, take the opportunity to learn how cool is the people of other countries.
  • Note: My Engislh isn't good enough; This was a simple analysis, someday I will write specifically about a region.
  • I just wanted to try to write a long text.
  • Thanks for the correction and if you want to know me, write me.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English