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  • A small monologue

    • I was thinking about the perception that people have in the world concerning to other people in the world.
    • More specifically, people of others countries in the world.
    • I'm an international business student; during my study process I had learned about how doing business in many countries, but also I had learned about cultures in others countries.
    • In that process, I recognized there are many lies concerning to the perception of others countries.
    • For example, -People in the world think that american people are so materialistic, with hungry for power and hungry for burgers and others things that are not totally real.
  • -The European people believe that they are a superior race, with superior things and superior language and superior bla bla bla.. and the discrimination in european countries is evident.
  • -The Asian people are the nerds of the world, their childrens born with a PC and everything that you can do it, an Asia boy can do it better than you.
  • -The African people are the poorest in the world -The Latin american people has the farming of the world where the drugs are caring to send to each country in the world.
  • And I wont write about the arabic people.
  • These are lies, bad thoughts with we are growing in ours live without stop to think . Are true?
  • Of course no !!
  • What is happening is that the bad people excel.
  • We ( the good people) are more than the bad people and we have to excel.
  • Not all European people are racist, not all American people are materialistic, not all Asian people .... not all the american people...not all the african people... NOT ALL.
  • Please, take the opportunity to learn how cool is the people of other countries.
  • Note: My Engislh isn't good enough; This was a simple analysis, someday I will write specifically about a region.
  • I just wanted to try to write a long text.
  • Thanks for the correction and if you want to know me, write me.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • I was thinking about the perception that people have in the world concerning to other people in the world.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • I was thinking about the perception that people have in the world concerning towith other people in the world.
      Thai_VuThai_Vu profile picture Komentáre
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • I was thinking about the perception that people have in the world concerning to other people in the worldconcerning people not of their own race and country.
      AndiehAndieh profile picture Komentáre
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 1PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 1
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    • I'm an international business student; during my study process I had learned about how doing business in many countries, but also I had learned about cultures in others countries.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • I'm an international business student; during my study process I hadve learned about how doinghow business is done in many countries, but also I hadI have also learned about cultures in others countries.
      Thai_VuThai_Vu profile picture Komentáre
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 3
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    • For example, -People in the world think that american people are so materialistic, with hungry for power and hungry for burgers and others things that are not totally real.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • For example,¶¶-P almost people in the world think that aAmerican people are so materialistic, with hungry for power and, hungry for burgers and others things that are not totally real.
      Thai_VuThai_Vu profile picture Komentáre
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 5PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 5
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    • -The European people believe that they are a superior race, with superior things and superior language and superior bla bla bla.. and the discrimination in european countries is evident.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 6PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 6
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    • -The Asian people are the nerds of the world, their childrens born with a PC and everything that you can do it, an Asia boy can do it better than you.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 7
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    • -The African people are the poorest in the world -The Latin american people has the farming of the world where the drugs are caring to send to each country in the world.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 8PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 8
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    • Not all European people are racist, not all American people are materialistic, not all Asian people .... not all the american people...not all the african people... NOT ALL.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 14PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 14
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    • Note: My Engislh isn't good enough; This was a simple analysis, someday I will write specifically about a region.
      Zahlasuj teraz!
    • PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 16PRIDAJTE NOVÚ OPRAVU! - veta 16
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