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  • One Of MY Best Friends

    • One of my best friends named Phoenix was my university classmate, also lived in the same domitory.
    • Except us speaking Cantonese, other roomates speak Mandarin, so we have been friends soon, and being pen and ink in our university time.
    • I really admire her because she has a red personalities.She was the leader of braskball team of our college, leading her team to win the second place in our university braskball match,which was the best place of our college since 2003.She is hard-working too.When she set her mind to something, she would persist.Taking an example of IELTS,she has decided to go abroad for further studying in Astrulia, she repeared for the exam by herself since she was senior.Thought without approvment of her parents, she insisted to do it.She has ten times exam in 2 years and a half,and eventully being successful in last mouth.
    • Our teacher said no student she known likes her to do such hard for her dream.
    • She is going abroad this mouth,best wishes for her.

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    • I really admire her because she has a red personalities.She was the leader of braskball team of our college, leading her team to win the second place in our university braskball match,which was the best place of our college since 2003.She is hard-working too.When she set her mind to something, she would persist.Taking an example of IELTS,she has decided to go abroad for further studying in Astrulia, she repeared for the exam by herself since she was senior.Thought without approvment of her parents, she insisted to do it.She has ten times exam in 2 years and a half,and eventully being successful in last mouth.
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    • I really admire her because she has aone of that red personalities. She was the leader of brbasketballs team leader of our college, leading ther team to win the second place in our university brasketball match, which was the best place of our college since 2003. She is hard-working too. When she set her mind to something, she would persist.Taking ans. For example of IELTS, she has decided to go abroad for further studying in Austrualia, she prepeared for the exam by herself since she was senior.Thought w Without approvmental of her parents, she insisted to do it. She haspresented ten times the exam in 2 years and a half, and eventually beingshe was successful in the last mounth.
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    • I really admire her because she has a red personalitiesy.She was the leader of braskball team of our college, leading her team to win the second place in our university brasketball match, which was the best place of our college since 2003.She is hard-working too. When she set her mind to something, she would persist. Taking an example of IELTS, she has decided to go abroad for further studying in Austrulia, she repeared fortook the exam by herself since she was senior.Thought w Without the approvmental of her parents, she insisted ton doing it. She has taken timeshe exam in 2 years and a half,andten times in the last two and a half years, and was eventually being successful in the last mouth.
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