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Text from NicolasNunes - English

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    • Everyday the people chat online with me and laugh all the time there, but when I see the same people at the streets, they get away, most of they don't look at my face, simply pretend that didn't see.
    • So I think, Is it the technology's evil?
    • The people have all the technology secury but they haven't simplicity to do the same at the past life :/

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    • Everyday the people chat online with me and laugh all the time there, but when I see the same people at the streets, they get away, most of they don't look at my face, simply pretend that didn't see.
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    • Everyday the people chat online with me and laugh all the time there, but when I see the same people at the streets, they get away, most of they don't look at my face, simply pretend thatlike they didn't see.
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    • The people have all the technology secury but they haven't simplicity to do the same at the past life :/
      Äänestä nyt!
    • The people have all the technology secury but they haven't simplicity to do the same atFrom now on, everyone has access to technology and starts forgetting the simplicity they had in the past. life :/
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