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    • Everyday the people chat online with me and laugh all the time there, but when I see the same people at the streets, they get away, most of they don't look at my face, simply pretend that didn't see.
    • So I think, Is it the technology's evil?
    • The people have all the technology secury but they haven't simplicity to do the same at the past life :/

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    • Everyday the people chat online with me and laugh all the time there, but when I see the same people at the streets, they get away, most of they don't look at my face, simply pretend that didn't see.
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    • Everyday the people chat online with me and laugh all the time there, but when I see the same people at the streets, they get away, most of they don't look at my face, simply pretend thatlike they didn't see.
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    • Everyday the peopleI chat online with me anddifferent people. They laugh all the time there, but when I see the same people atin the streets, they get away, mjust pass over me. Most of theym don't even look at my face,e. They simply pretend thatey didn't senotice me.
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    • The people have all the technology secury but they haven't simplicity to do the same at the past life :/
      투표하세요!
    • The people have all the technology secury but they haven't simplicity to do the same atFrom now on, everyone has access to technology and starts forgetting the simplicity they had in the past. life :/
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