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Mini Essay: Is it Better to Work Hard or Work Smart?

• However, some people think that this is not so important with the right connections and efficiently applying resources such as money.

• In this essay I am going to discuss both points of view and give the my opinion about why working hard is not enough to get success.

• On the one hand, an assertive person, who spends all their time to achieve a certain goal, is likely to get a promotion, because their behaviour has showed their boss that they are responsible and can get things done on time.

• For instance, this type of people spend all their time at work, they even work on holidays and sometimes on the weekends.

• Of course they have as much more money as and less time to spend it.

• On the other hand, a really successful people are the bosses or owners of companies , where the people from the example above work, and they are completely different from their employees.

• First of all they have the right connections who help to solve problems in their business and make money more efficiently.

• To sum up, I agree with opinion that working smart is much better than working hard, because those people have more money and more free-time.