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Văn bản từ Dmytro-Sytro - English

  • Who wants to be rich?

    • Today world lives with an idea that money makes people happy and that everybody must try to reach success and earn a lot.
    • I don’t want to persuade anybody that the beauty of soul is better than conditions you live in, but I think the very idea the more money you have the more possibilities you get is wrong.
    • We have this connection between money and happy life and it is wrong connection. Why?
  • Because people have much less needs that wishes, and wishes is a sphere of life which is formed by this commodity-money system we live in.
  • We are taught to buy things that we don’t really need but which are considered to be “cool”, “important”, “normal” etc. The more we want to buy the more money we want to earn.
  • But in this wish we think only about ourselves (or our family – it’s the same) but we don’t thing globally – about our country, planet, etc. The Earth doesn’t need so many managers but needs scientists, ecologies etc. And when we want to be rich our wishes are very egoistic because who is rich is important, who is poor is a person out of concern.
  • My point is it is not bad to be rich or to want to be rich.
  • But we should revaluate our wishes and think about others.

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    • Today world lives with an idea that money makes people happy and that everybody must try to reach success and earn a lot.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Today the world lives with an idea that money makes people happy and that everybody must try to reach success and earn a lot.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 2
    • I don’t want to persuade anybody that the beauty of soul is better than conditions you live in, but I think the very idea the more money you have the more possibilities you get is wrong.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I don’t want to persuade anybody that the beauty of soul is better than conditions you live in, but I think the very idea that the more money you have, then the more possibilities you get is wrong.
      alexgr03alexgr03 profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
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    • Because people have much less needs that wishes, and wishes is a sphere of life which is formed by this commodity-money system we live in.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • We are taught to buy things that we don’t really need but which are considered to be “cool”, “important”, “normal” etc. The more we want to buy the more money we want to earn.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • But in this wish we think only about ourselves (or our family – it’s the same) but we don’t thing globally – about our country, planet, etc. The Earth doesn’t need so many managers but needs scientists, ecologies etc. And when we want to be rich our wishes are very egoistic because who is rich is important, who is poor is a person out of concern.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
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