Nhờ sửa bài giúp

Văn bản từ aabdan - English

  • About Schools

  • Schools, the second source where children's knowledge come from.
    • As all parents, send their children to schools to learn about the world facts, languages and social ethics in addition to sciences.
    • Due to this fact, some people think the schools should teach young person how to be a good parent.
    • To be a good parent you should have a specific skills and sufficient knowledge about how to teach and manipulate a young person.
    • Some of these are learn how to listen to teenagers and how to know if they are facing a problem in specific area.
  • Knows how to pass your faith to him, how to learn him critical thinking by keep asking why and how to be calm for huge questions from them.
  • Moreover, if for some reasons the parent does not have these skills and knowledge, I think they have to start looking for special courses to get up these skills and knowledge.
  • This in case they are aware for these needs, otherwise we will face a big problem with young person who did not have sufficient knowledge about how to solve their problems, In the result may take improper actions and in consequences gets more problems and my bigger than the original one.
  • Returning to getting a source for how to be a good parent to avoid this, I think the schools is the best place for this.
  • In conclusion, schools are playing a big rule in young person education process as it is offering a wide range of knowledge for the second generation of our committee.

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    • As all parents, send their children to schools to learn about the world facts, languages and social ethics in addition to sciences.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • As all parents, send their children to schools to learn about the world's facts, languages and social ethics, in addition to sciences.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
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    • To be a good parent you should have a specific skills and sufficient knowledge about how to teach and manipulate a young person.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • To be a good parent you should have a specific skills and sufficient knowledge about how to teach and manipulate a young person.
    • To be aAs good parent you should have a specific skills and sufficient knowledge about how to teach and manipulate a young personaffect a child.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • Knows how to pass your faith to him, how to learn him critical thinking by keep asking why and how to be calm for huge questions from them.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
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    • Moreover, if for some reasons the parent does not have these skills and knowledge, I think they have to start looking for special courses to get up these skills and knowledge.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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    • This in case they are aware for these needs, otherwise we will face a big problem with young person who did not have sufficient knowledge about how to solve their problems, In the result may take improper actions and in consequences gets more problems and my bigger than the original one.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
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    • Returning to getting a source for how to be a good parent to avoid this, I think the schools is the best place for this.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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    • In conclusion, schools are playing a big rule in young person education process as it is offering a wide range of knowledge for the second generation of our committee.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10