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  • About Schools

  • Schools, the second source where children's knowledge come from.
    • As all parents, send their children to schools to learn about the world facts, languages and social ethics in addition to sciences.
    • Due to this fact, some people think the schools should teach young person how to be a good parent.
    • To be a good parent you should have a specific skills and sufficient knowledge about how to teach and manipulate a young person.
    • Some of these are learn how to listen to teenagers and how to know if they are facing a problem in specific area.
  • Knows how to pass your faith to him, how to learn him critical thinking by keep asking why and how to be calm for huge questions from them.
  • Moreover, if for some reasons the parent does not have these skills and knowledge, I think they have to start looking for special courses to get up these skills and knowledge.
  • This in case they are aware for these needs, otherwise we will face a big problem with young person who did not have sufficient knowledge about how to solve their problems, In the result may take improper actions and in consequences gets more problems and my bigger than the original one.
  • Returning to getting a source for how to be a good parent to avoid this, I think the schools is the best place for this.
  • In conclusion, schools are playing a big rule in young person education process as it is offering a wide range of knowledge for the second generation of our committee.

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    • As all parents, send their children to schools to learn about the world facts, languages and social ethics in addition to sciences.
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    • As all parents, send their children to schools to learn about the world's facts, languages and social ethics, in addition to sciences.
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    • Due to this fact, some people think the schools should teach young person how to be a good parent.
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    • Due to this factBecause of this, some people think the schools should teach young persochildren how to become a good parent.
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    • To be a good parent you should have a specific skills and sufficient knowledge about how to teach and manipulate a young person.
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    • To be a good parent you should have a specific skills and sufficient knowledge about how to teach and manipulate a young person.
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    • To be aAs good parent you should have a specific skills and sufficient knowledge about how to teach and manipulate a young personaffect a child.
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    • Some of these are learn how to listen to teenagers and how to know if they are facing a problem in specific area.
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    • Some of these are learning how to listen to teenagers and how to know if they are facing a problem in specific area.
      alexgr03alexgr03 profile picture 댓글
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    • Some of these skills are learning how to listen to teenagers and how to know if they are facing a problem in specific area.
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    • Knows how to pass your faith to him, how to learn him critical thinking by keep asking why and how to be calm for huge questions from them.
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    • Moreover, if for some reasons the parent does not have these skills and knowledge, I think they have to start looking for special courses to get up these skills and knowledge.
      투표하세요!
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    • This in case they are aware for these needs, otherwise we will face a big problem with young person who did not have sufficient knowledge about how to solve their problems, In the result may take improper actions and in consequences gets more problems and my bigger than the original one.
      투표하세요!
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    • Returning to getting a source for how to be a good parent to avoid this, I think the schools is the best place for this.
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    • In conclusion, schools are playing a big rule in young person education process as it is offering a wide range of knowledge for the second generation of our committee.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10