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- My name is Gilvan, I'm brasilian , I live in Feira de Santana town, I'm student , like music, internet and games, I want learning English and need your help.

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- My name is Gilvan, I'm brasilian , I live in Feira de Santana town, I'm student , like music, internet and games, I want learning English and need your help.
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- My name is Gilvan, I'm bBraszilian ,. I live in a town called Feira de Santana ~~town,~~. I'm a student ,. I like music, ithe Internet and computer games,. I want to learn~~ing~~ English and need your help.
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- My name is Gilvan, I'm brasilian , I live in Feira de Santana town, I'm student , i like listenning music, internet and playing games,. I want to learn~~ing~~ English and i'll really need your help for that.
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