Исправке

ПОМОЗИТЕ ИСПРАВИТИ ОДМАХ!Неисправљено

Текст од GilvanS - English

Оригинална верзија
Исправљена Верзија

I am Gilvan
Hello!
- My name is Gilvan, I'm brasilian , I live in Feira de Santana town, I'm student , like music, internet and games, I want learning English and need your help.

GilvanSJune 2014Сада гласајте !
- Report as spam?

МОЛИМО, ПОМОЗИТЕ ИСПРАВИТИ СВАКУ РЕЧЕНИЦУ! - English

Наслов
- I am Gilvan
  Сада гласајте !
- ДОДАЈ НОВУ ИСПРАВKУ ! - Наслов
Реченица 1
- Hello!
  Сада гласајте !
- ДОДАЈ НОВУ ИСПРАВKУ ! - Реченица 1
Реченица 2
- My name is Gilvan, I'm brasilian , I live in Feira de Santana town, I'm student , like music, internet and games, I want learning English and need your help.
  Сада гласајте !
- My name is Gilvan, I'm bBraszilian ,. I live in a town called Feira de Santana ~~town,~~. I'm a student ,. I like music, ithe Internet and computer games,. I want to learn~~ing~~ English and need your help.
  masoudch Коментари
  
  Report as spam?
- My name is Gilvan, I'm brasilian , I live in Feira de Santana town, I'm student , i like listenning music, internet and playing games,. I want to learn~~ing~~ English and i'll really need your help for that.
  Dixem Коментари
  
  Report as spam?
- ДОДАЈ НОВУ ИСПРАВKУ ! - Реченица 2