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"SweetEmotionArt" is it useful?
Dear friends.
- I'm an artist, and going to open on-line shop.
I'm hardly trying to find the name of the shop.
The last that, I've created))) was "SweetEmotionArt" So on, very need your advises.
Is it correct in English? Normal?
Or some kind of stupid things as our people have in menus, for example "roast language"))) It would be so kind of you, to correct me.

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- "SweetEmotionArt" is it useful?
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Tiêu đề
câu 1
- Dear friends.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- I'm an artist, and going to open on-line shop.
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- I'm an artist, and I'm going to open an on-line shop.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
câu 3
- I'm hardly trying to find the name of the shop.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
câu 4
- The last that, I've created))) was "SweetEmotionArt" So on, very need your advises.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
câu 5
- Is it correct in English? Normal?
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
câu 6
- Or some kind of stupid things as our people have in menus, for example "roast language"))) It would be so kind of you, to correct me.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6