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Text from AlenaR - English

"SweetEmotionArt" is it useful?
Dear friends.
- I'm an artist, and going to open on-line shop.
I'm hardly trying to find the name of the shop.
The last that, I've created))) was "SweetEmotionArt" So on, very need your advises.
Is it correct in English? Normal?
Or some kind of stupid things as our people have in menus, for example "roast language"))) It would be so kind of you, to correct me.

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- "SweetEmotionArt" is it useful?
  Vote now!
- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Заглавие
Sentence 1
- Dear friends.
  Vote now!
- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 1
Sentence 2
- I'm an artist, and going to open on-line shop.
  Vote now!
- I'm an artist, and I'm going to open an on-line shop.
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  Сигнализирай за спам?
  
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- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 2
Sentence 3
- I'm hardly trying to find the name of the shop.
  Vote now!
- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 3
Sentence 4
- The last that, I've created))) was "SweetEmotionArt" So on, very need your advises.
  Vote now!
- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 4
Sentence 5
- Is it correct in English? Normal?
  Vote now!
- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 5
Sentence 6
- Or some kind of stupid things as our people have in menus, for example "roast language"))) It would be so kind of you, to correct me.
  Vote now!
- ДОБАВИ НОВА КОРЕКЦИЯ! - Sentence 6