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- One time, I was in the bus, went to Rio de Janeiro, and a women started yell, so I turned my head and her son was borning.
- The bus stoped and the peoples are there called to ambulence, after she went to hospital.

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- One time, I was in the bus, went to Rio de Janeiro, and a women started yell, so I turned my head and her son was borning.
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- One time, I was in the bus~~, went~~ going to Rio de Janeiro, and a women started yelling, so I turned my head ~~and her son was borning~~towards the woman and I realized that she was having a baby... OR that she was giving a birth.
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- The bus stoped and the peoples are there called to ambulence, after she went to hospital.
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- The bus stopped and the p~~eoples are there called to ambulence, after~~assengers called (OR phoned) the ambulance (OR an amb...) (OR called the Emergency OR called for help), then she went to the hospital.
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