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    • One time, I was in the bus, went to Rio de Janeiro, and a women started yell, so I turned my head and her son was borning.
    • The bus stoped and the peoples are there called to ambulence, after she went to hospital.

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    • One time, I was in the bus, went to Rio de Janeiro, and a women started yell, so I turned my head and her son was borning.
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    • One time, I was in the bus, went going to Rio de Janeiro, and a women started yelling, so I turned my head and her son was borningtowards the woman and I realized that she was having a baby... OR that she was giving a birth.
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    • The bus stoped and the peoples are there called to ambulence, after she went to hospital.
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    • The bus stopped and the peoples are there called to ambulence, afterassengers called (OR phoned) the ambulance (OR an amb...) (OR called the Emergency OR called for help), then she went to the hospital.
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