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Teks daripada ev9eniy - English

  • Pros and Cons of Work and Study at Home

    • In the modern society high-tech technology were taken an important place and became significantly vital among people.
    • However, this is not only gave to the human the ability to work and study at home, but also could become common among in the future.
    • This essay is going to discuss possible consequence of that as well as pros and cons for society.
    • There is no doubt that a computer became the major part of humans lives, because it helps people do whatever they want at home rather than going out for working or study.
  • Nevertheless, some employers or teachers get less control for their employees or students.
    • As a result, it sometimes can decrease quality of involvement of that people in process of creating positive results such as good work or solid knowledge.
    • For instance, a person is working at home be able not to do that he have to do, so instead of working he or she are just watching TV.
    • So, in some cases, work at home is not as good as it could be in offices or classes with strict control.
    • On the other hand, working or studying at home is helping a society with twenty-one century problems such as traffic jams and overcrowded.
    • For example, a person, which works at home, dose not spend time for commuting and, this way, he or she creates less traffic activity, so it can reduce traffic jams in a big cities.
    • In case of the study at home, school or university can take more students, so more people have the ability to get education for better life.
  • Therefore, in the future it becomes much more popular among members of a society.
    • To conclude, there are positive and negative sides of studying or working at home, however in my opinion, remove appearance as a worker or a student gets more and more popular in the modern society.

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

  • Title
  • Ayat 1
    • In the modern society high-tech technology were taken an important place and became significantly vital among people.
      Undi sekarang!
    • In the modern society high-tech, technology werehich is takening an important place and becameis becoming significantly vital among people.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
  • Ayat 2
    • However, this is not only gave to the human the ability to work and study at home, but also could become common among in the future.
      Undi sekarang!
    • However, this is not only gaveiving to the human the ability to work and study at home, but itb also could become common among in the future.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
  • Ayat 3
    • This essay is going to discuss possible consequence of that as well as pros and cons for society.
      Undi sekarang!
    • This essay is going to discuss possible consequence of that as well aabout pros and cons of society and its pros and cons for societysible consequences.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
  • Ayat 4
    • There is no doubt that a computer became the major part of humans lives, because it helps people do whatever they want at home rather than going out for working or study.
      Undi sekarang!
    • There is no doubt that a computer became ¶the major part of humans lives,has ¶major place in humans lives.This happens because it helps people do whatever they want at home ,rather than going out for working or studying.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
  • Ayat 5
  • Ayat 6
    • As a result, it sometimes can decrease quality of involvement of that people in process of creating positive results such as good work or solid knowledge.
      Undi sekarang!
    • As a result, it sometimes it can decrease the quality of involvement of that people in process of creating positive results such as good work or solid knowledge.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6
  • Ayat 7
    • For instance, a person is working at home be able not to do that he have to do, so instead of working he or she are just watching TV.
      Undi sekarang!
    • For instance, ¶a person iswho workinges at home be abledoes not to do that he have to do,his responsibilities so instead of working he or she areis just watching TV.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7
  • Ayat 8
  • Ayat 9
    • On the other hand, working or studying at home is helping a society with twenty-one century problems such as traffic jams and overcrowded.
      Undi sekarang!
    • On the other hand, working or studying at home is helping as the society with twenty-oneof 21st sentury /modernity which ceonturyains a lot of problems such as traffic jams and overcrowded.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9
  • Ayat 10
    • For example, a person, which works at home, dose not spend time for commuting and, this way, he or she creates less traffic activity, so it can reduce traffic jams in a big cities.
      Undi sekarang!
    • For example, ¶a person, which works at home, doses not spend time for commuting and, this way, he or she creates less traffic activity, so it can reduce traffic jams in a big cities.
    • For example, ¶a person, which works at home, dose not spend time for commuting and, this way, he or she creates less traffic activity, so it can reduce traffic jams in a big cities.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 10TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 10
  • Ayat 11
    • In case of the study at home, school or university can take more students, so more people have the ability to get education for better life.
      Undi sekarang!
    • In case of the studying at home,¶school or university can take more students, so more people have the ability to get education for better life.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 11TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 11
  • Ayat 12
  • Ayat 13
    • To conclude, there are positive and negative sides of studying or working at home, however in my opinion, remove appearance as a worker or a student gets more and more popular in the modern society.
      Undi sekarang!
    • To conclude, there are positive and negative sides of studying or working at home, h.However in my opinion, remove appearance as a worker or a student gets more and more popular in the modern society.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 13TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 13