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  • Pros and Cons of Work and Study at Home

    • In the modern society high-tech technology were taken an important place and became significantly vital among people.
    • However, this is not only gave to the human the ability to work and study at home, but also could become common among in the future.
    • This essay is going to discuss possible consequence of that as well as pros and cons for society.
    • There is no doubt that a computer became the major part of humans lives, because it helps people do whatever they want at home rather than going out for working or study.
  • Nevertheless, some employers or teachers get less control for their employees or students.
    • As a result, it sometimes can decrease quality of involvement of that people in process of creating positive results such as good work or solid knowledge.
    • For instance, a person is working at home be able not to do that he have to do, so instead of working he or she are just watching TV.
    • So, in some cases, work at home is not as good as it could be in offices or classes with strict control.
    • On the other hand, working or studying at home is helping a society with twenty-one century problems such as traffic jams and overcrowded.
    • For example, a person, which works at home, dose not spend time for commuting and, this way, he or she creates less traffic activity, so it can reduce traffic jams in a big cities.
    • In case of the study at home, school or university can take more students, so more people have the ability to get education for better life.
  • Therefore, in the future it becomes much more popular among members of a society.
    • To conclude, there are positive and negative sides of studying or working at home, however in my opinion, remove appearance as a worker or a student gets more and more popular in the modern society.

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    • There is no doubt that a computer became the major part of humans lives, because it helps people do whatever they want at home rather than going out for working or study.
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    • There is no doubt that a computer became ¶the major part of humans lives,has ¶major place in humans lives.This happens because it helps people do whatever they want at home ,rather than going out for working or studying.
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    • As a result, it sometimes can decrease quality of involvement of that people in process of creating positive results such as good work or solid knowledge.
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    • As a result, it sometimes it can decrease the quality of involvement of that people in process of creating positive results such as good work or solid knowledge.
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    • For instance, a person is working at home be able not to do that he have to do, so instead of working he or she are just watching TV.
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    • For instance, ¶a person iswho workinges at home be abledoes not to do that he have to do,his responsibilities so instead of working he or she areis just watching TV.
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    • On the other hand, working or studying at home is helping a society with twenty-one century problems such as traffic jams and overcrowded.
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    • On the other hand, working or studying at home is helping as the society with twenty-oneof 21st sentury /modernity which ceonturyains a lot of problems such as traffic jams and overcrowded.
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    • For example, a person, which works at home, dose not spend time for commuting and, this way, he or she creates less traffic activity, so it can reduce traffic jams in a big cities.
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    • For example, ¶a person, which works at home, doses not spend time for commuting and, this way, he or she creates less traffic activity, so it can reduce traffic jams in a big cities.
    • For example, ¶a person, which works at home, dose not spend time for commuting and, this way, he or she creates less traffic activity, so it can reduce traffic jams in a big cities.
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    • To conclude, there are positive and negative sides of studying or working at home, however in my opinion, remove appearance as a worker or a student gets more and more popular in the modern society.
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    • To conclude, there are positive and negative sides of studying or working at home, h.However in my opinion, remove appearance as a worker or a student gets more and more popular in the modern society.
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