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- Today is a good day !
- Today, I went to keep childreen's my best friend.
- I love play with them, and then my best friend and I had cooked a chocolate cake.
- We ate all the cake.

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- Today is a good day !
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- Today iwas a good day !
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câu 1
- Today, I went to keep childreen's my best friend.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- Today, I went to ~~keep childreen's~~look after my best friend's children.
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câu 2
- I love play with them, and then my best friend and I had cooked a chocolate cake.
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- I love playing with them, and then my best friend and I had cooked a chocolate cake.
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câu 3
- We ate all the cake.
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- We ate ~~all th~~the whole cake.
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