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- Today is a good day !
- Today, I went to keep childreen's my best friend.
- I love play with them, and then my best friend and I had cooked a chocolate cake.
- We ate all the cake.

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MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

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- Today is a good day !
  Undi sekarang!
- Today iwas a good day !
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Today, I went to keep childreen's my best friend.
  Undi sekarang!
- Today, I went to ~~keep childreen's~~look after my best friend's children.
  prudencekwok Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I love play with them, and then my best friend and I had cooked a chocolate cake.
  Undi sekarang!
- I love playing with them, and then my best friend and I had cooked a chocolate cake.
  prudencekwok Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- We ate all the cake.
  Undi sekarang!
- We ate ~~all th~~the whole cake.
  prudencekwok Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3