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- Dear kate Thaks for your postcard from Egypt.Did you visit the Great Pyramid in the end?
Or did you spend whole day at the beach?
- I have never been in Egypt but my best friend said that is one of the most amazing countries around the world.
- I would like to viset egypt too

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- My holiday
  Bầu chọn ngay!
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câu 1
- Dear kate Thaks for your postcard from Egypt.Did you visit the Great Pyramid in the end?
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- Dear kKate¶T,¶thanks for your postcard from Egypt. Did you visit the Great Pyramid in the end?
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  Report as spam?
  
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- Or did you spend whole day at the beach?
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
câu 3
- I have never been in Egypt but my best friend said that is one of the most amazing countries around the world.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I have never been in Egypt but my best friend said that is one of the most amazing countries ~~around~~in the world.
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  Report as spam?
  
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
câu 4
- I would like to viset egypt too
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- I would like to viset eEgypt, too.
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  Report as spam?
  
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4