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uyamata17からのテキスト - English

  • My holiday

    • Dear kate Thaks for your postcard from Egypt.Did you visit the Great Pyramid in the end?
  • Or did you spend whole day at the beach?
    • I have never been in Egypt but my best friend said that is one of the most amazing countries around the world.
    • I would like to viset egypt too

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English