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  • I’m Polly.
  • Now I am 16 and I suppose I can’t go to the camp as child, but I can’t imagine my life without Holton, that’s why I dream to be a supporter .
  • After my first staying in Hilton I was in euphoria and I couldn’t do any , but thinking of it.
  • I went to the camp only 3 times .What a pity, I hadn’t heard of it before.
  • I think it’s unbelievable everybody in camp is so friendly and unusual . It’s amazing!
  • Both the staff and hiltoners are a unity.
  • There is hardly any difference between them.
  • All members of the staff like their job very much and they are ready to help you and talk to you any time.
  • They become your friends and you will never forget them.
  • As for me, I finished music school some years ago.
  • There I learnt a lot of important things.
  • It was the best experience in my life.
  • If I didn’t go to music school, I would have another person.
  • Thanks to classic music I learnt to express my feelings and emotions.
  • My first performance on the stage was there.
  • I always remember it and see it was one of the main events if my life.
  • Moreover, I have been dancing for 10 years .I am fond of classic, Russian folk and modern dancing.
  • It is a perfect way to express yourself.
  • I think, it is my favourite activity!
  • I’m always ready to dance, especially in Holton.
  • If I have free time , I always try to do something new.
  • I’m sure, it’s boring when you have nothing.
  • I also like playing tennis and do extreme sports.
  • My friends say I’m an easy-going and optimistic, so for me Hilton is a source of magic feelings!
  • I wish I were a supporter!
  • It’s so amusing to think the shows out, sing songs, always smile, play and have fun with children.
  • There’s lots of positive energy in Hilton, so everybody feels happy!

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