Text from Pollly - English
My essay)I have some problems with articles and prepositions
- I’m Polly.
- Now I am 16 and I suppose I can’t go to the camp as child, but I can’t imagine my life without Holton, that’s why I dream to be a supporter .
- After my first staying in Hilton I was in euphoria and I couldn’t do any , but thinking of it.
- I went to the camp only 3 times .What a pity, I hadn’t heard of it before.
- I think it’s unbelievable everybody in camp is so friendly and unusual . It’s amazing!
- Both the staff and hiltoners are a unity.
- There is hardly any difference between them.
- All members of the staff like their job very much and they are ready to help you and talk to you any time.
- They become your friends and you will never forget them.
- As for me, I finished music school some years ago.
- There I learnt a lot of important things.
- It was the best experience in my life.
- If I didn’t go to music school, I would have another person.
- Thanks to classic music I learnt to express my feelings and emotions.
- My first performance on the stage was there.
- I always remember it and see it was one of the main events if my life.
- Moreover, I have been dancing for 10 years .I am fond of classic, Russian folk and modern dancing.
- It is a perfect way to express yourself.
- I think, it is my favourite activity!
- I’m always ready to dance, especially in Holton.
- If I have free time , I always try to do something new.
- I’m sure, it’s boring when you have nothing.
- I also like playing tennis and do extreme sports.
- My friends say I’m an easy-going and optimistic, so for me Hilton is a source of magic feelings!
- I wish I were a supporter!
- It’s so amusing to think the shows out, sing songs, always smile, play and have fun with children.
- There’s lots of positive energy in Hilton, so everybody feels happy!
- PolllyJanuary 2013Vote now!
PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English