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  • My first and favourite TV show!

  • My first and favourite TV show.
  • Hi Bloggers, I'm going to talk about a TV show I watched when I was younger.
    • I was in 2th grade when i watched the first chapter of a colombian TV show called "Betty la fea", it was so famous, I remember that I watched it with my family and i liked too much.
    • It was about an econmy graduated girl who had the highest academic achievement on the best colombian university, but when she started to looking for a job, nobodys employed her because she was so ugly, but nobody thought she was so intelligent too.
    • Finally she was employed by a fashion business called "Ecómoda" not for her curriculum, the real reason was her boss was so womanizer and his fiancé needed to take on her for be sure that her boyfriend wouln't has an affair.
    • I liked this show for many reasons: It was so wholesome, it adress a contemporany theme "the prejudice and discrimination", it has many lessons for us (as society) and because it was so funny! I enjoyed it!
    • Originally it was on tha air in between 1999-2001, but on public television it was trasmited many other times.
    • I think that i watched it three or four times on internet, I never had bored with it.
    • And here's my favourite scene in this show, it's so funny!
  • I hope you enjoy!
  • :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ihh0s8WAGoM

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    • I was in 2th grade when i watched the first chapter of a colombian TV show called "Betty la fea", it was so famous, I remember that I watched it with my family and i liked too much.
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    • It was about an econmy graduated girl who had the highest academic achievement on the best colombian university, but when she started to looking for a job, nobodys employed her because she was so ugly, but nobody thought she was so intelligent too.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It was about an econmy girl who graduated girl whoin economics, and had the highest academic achievement oin the best cColombian university, b. But when she started to looking for a job, nobodys employed her because she was so ugly, butand nobody thought she was socould be intelligent tooeither.
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    • Finally she was employed by a fashion business called "Ecómoda" not for her curriculum, the real reason was her boss was so womanizer and his fiancé needed to take on her for be sure that her boyfriend wouln't has an affair.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Finally, she was employed by a fashion business called "Ecómoda", not for her curriculum, vitae/ academic background, but the real reason was because her boss was souch a womanizer and his fiancée needed to take on her for to be sure that her boyfriend wouln't hasve an affair with (the secretary/ insert her jobe role here).
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    • I liked this show for many reasons: It was so wholesome, it adress a contemporany theme "the prejudice and discrimination", it has many lessons for us (as society) and because it was so funny! I enjoyed it!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I liked this show for many reasons: It was so wholesome, it adresses a contemporany theme "the , that of "prejudice and discrimination", it has many lessons for us (as society) and because it was also so funny! I enjoyed it!
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    • Originally it was on tha air in between 1999-2001, but on public television it was trasmited many other times.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • OIt was originally it was on tha air inbroadcast/ televised between 1999-2001, but on public television it was trasmitted on many other timeoccasions.
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