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  • The Dangers of Cramming

    • The article The Dangers of Cramming refers to the problem of students who tend to do more harm than good by depriving themselves of sleep before taking big exams .
    • The author claims that lack of sleep may result in the intellectual lapses leading to concentration loss.
    • What is more, Buchholtz underlines that the range of sleeping time is different for each person.
    • The true danger Buchholtz ascribes to stimulants like caffeine or amphetamine which temporarily keep students awake but after they stop working they cause sleep incapability or even hallucinations.
    • The author states that further recovery and restoration of proper sleep time may last up to two days.
    • Another factor having impact on the quality of sleep is stress.
    • Buchholtz advices how to minimize its’ side effects by making relaxing exercises.
    • Occurrence of sleep overdose after such damaging time should not worry as the brain needs time to recover.
    • At the end of the article we find suggestion that all students should do for the future is to make any changes carefully.

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    • The article The Dangers of Cramming refers to the problem of students who tend to do more harm than good by depriving themselves of sleep before taking big exams .
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    • TheAn article entitled "The Dangers of Cramming refers to the problem of students who tend to do more harm than good by" pertains to the habit of some students who do unto themselves more harm than good by putting off their studies until the last minute, staying up late and thus depriving themselves of sleep before taking big exams .
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    • The author claims that lack of sleep may result in the intellectual lapses leading to concentration loss.
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    • The author, who is named Buchholtz, claims that lack of sleep may result in the intellectual lapses leading to concentration lossa state of diminished or even total loss of (mental) concentration.¶

      NOTE: Are you sure about the spelling of this author's name? "Buchholtz" is rather unusual -- especially two letter "h" in a row. I'll bet the correct spelling is actually "Buckholtz". Maybe not, but it's a hunch      .
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    • What is more, Buchholtz underlines that the range of sleeping time is different for each person.
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    • What is moreMoreover, Buchholtz underlinstresses that the range of sleeping time is different for eachadequate sleep duration varies with the person.
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    • The true danger Buchholtz ascribes to stimulants like caffeine or amphetamine which temporarily keep students awake but after they stop working they cause sleep incapability or even hallucinations.
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    • The true danger Buchholtz ascribes toBuchholtz maintains that the use of such stimulants likeas caffeine or amphetamine which temporarily keep students awake but after they stop working they cause sleep incapability or evens, used by students remain "awake", can lead to an inability to sleep and possibly mental hallucinations.
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    • The author states that further recovery and restoration of proper sleep time may last up to two days.
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    • The author further states that furthe time required for recovery and the restoration of proper sleep time may last , or normal, sleep habits can take up to two days.¶

      NOTE: Having been a university professor for MANY years and having seen hundreds of examples of students afflicted with self-induced sleep deprivation, I cab assure "Buchholtz" that 'recovery and restoration" of normal sleep habits takes MUCH longer than "      up to two days."
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    • Buchholtz advices how to minimize its’ side effects by making relaxing exercises.
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    • Buchholtz advices howrecommends one engage in relaxing exercise to minimize its’ side effects by making relaxing exercises..¶

      NOTE: "Side effects" of what?
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    • Occurrence of sleep overdose after such damaging time should not worry as the brain needs time to recover.
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    • Occurrence of sleep overdose after such damaging time should not worryWhat would seem to some to be "oversleeping" after suffering sleep deprivation should not be of concern as the human brain needsin such situations needs much sleep and time to recover fully.
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    • At the end of the article we find suggestion that all students should do for the future is to make any changes carefully.
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    • At the end of the article we findThe article concludes by suggestiong that all students should do for the future is to make any changes carefully. be careful when preparing for examinations by not cramming and thus depriving themselves of sleep.
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