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  • The right to die (A dutch Law)

    • I agree with this law because I think everyone who has (have?) a certain age in whinch is no longer able to continue naturally with his forces, has the right to not survive for a long-agonizing death.
  • (I try to do it long) Is the worst way for a man to leave the world, because he wouldn't leave the earth in peace as it would be.
    • But in the other hand it would be also right (is also right), that is not too easy to set the limits and edges where we can act.
  • For this reason there should be some rules.
    • But the rules, I think, shouldn't be do from politicians, but from a true team of expecialist in medicine.
    • And also Church shouldn't put any word about, because the issues round the gift (dono) of life were made before the medicine get to the point where we are nowadays, and the things change.
    • I think that, things, when it can or the limits of survival allows, should be the most possible natural.
    • Therefore if the are good motifs to stay a living person, it's just to try if there possibilities, if not (otherwise, or else) nothing.
    • And every case should be ruled by a comittee (commissione) and last choice should be made by the family.
  • (it would be for the family)

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    • I agree with this law because I think everyone who has (have?) a certain age in whinch is no longer able to continue naturally with his forces, has the right to not survive for a long-agonizing death.
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    • I agree with this law because I think everyone who has (have?)reached a certain age, in whinch isthey are no longer able to continue naturally with histheir forces, has the right to not survive for a long-agonizing death.
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  • câu 2
    • (I try to do it long) Is the worst way for a man to leave the world, because he wouldn't leave the earth in peace as it would be.
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  • câu 3
    • But in the other hand it would be also right (is also right), that is not too easy to set the limits and edges where we can act.
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    • But ion the other hand, it would be also right (is alsobe right), that it is not too easy to set the limits and edges where we can act.
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  • câu 5
    • But the rules, I think, shouldn't be do from politicians, but from a true team of expecialist in medicine.
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    • But the rules, I think, shouldn't be do fromset by politicians, but instead from a true team of exspecialists in medicine.
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  • câu 6
    • And also Church shouldn't put any word about, because the issues round the gift (dono) of life were made before the medicine get to the point where we are nowadays, and the things change.
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    • And alsolso the Church shouldn't put any word about, it because the issues roundconcerning the gift (dono) of life were made before the medicine gethas reached to the point where we are nowadays, and the thingsof advancement as where it is nowadays, and things continually change.
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  • câu 7
    • I think that, things, when it can or the limits of survival allows, should be the most possible natural.
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    • I think that, things life, when it can or the limits of survival allows, should be the most possible natural.
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  • câu 8
    • Therefore if the are good motifs to stay a living person, it's just to try if there possibilities, if not (otherwise, or else) nothing.
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    • Therefore, if there are good motifs to stay a living personkeep a person living, it's just to try if there possibilities, if not (otherwise, or else) nothing.
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  • câu 9
    • And every case should be ruled by a comittee (commissione) and last choice should be made by the family.
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    • And eEvery case should be ruled by a committee (commissione) and last, and the final choice should be made by the family.
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