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POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ TERAZ!Poprawiono

Text from Fantaudiovisivo - English

  • The right to die (A dutch Law)

    • I agree with this law because I think everyone who has (have?) a certain age in whinch is no longer able to continue naturally with his forces, has the right to not survive for a long-agonizing death.
  • (I try to do it long) Is the worst way for a man to leave the world, because he wouldn't leave the earth in peace as it would be.
    • But in the other hand it would be also right (is also right), that is not too easy to set the limits and edges where we can act.
  • For this reason there should be some rules.
    • But the rules, I think, shouldn't be do from politicians, but from a true team of expecialist in medicine.
    • And also Church shouldn't put any word about, because the issues round the gift (dono) of life were made before the medicine get to the point where we are nowadays, and the things change.
    • I think that, things, when it can or the limits of survival allows, should be the most possible natural.
    • Therefore if the are good motifs to stay a living person, it's just to try if there possibilities, if not (otherwise, or else) nothing.
    • And every case should be ruled by a comittee (commissione) and last choice should be made by the family.
  • (it would be for the family)

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
    • I agree with this law because I think everyone who has (have?) a certain age in whinch is no longer able to continue naturally with his forces, has the right to not survive for a long-agonizing death.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • I agree with this law because I think everyone who has (have?)reached a certain age, in whinch isthey are no longer able to continue naturally with histheir forces, has the right to not survive for a long-agonizing death.
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    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
    • (I try to do it long) Is the worst way for a man to leave the world, because he wouldn't leave the earth in peace as it would be.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
    • But in the other hand it would be also right (is also right), that is not too easy to set the limits and edges where we can act.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • But ion the other hand, it would be also right (is alsobe right), that it is not too easy to set the limits and edges where we can act.
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    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • And also Church shouldn't put any word about, because the issues round the gift (dono) of life were made before the medicine get to the point where we are nowadays, and the things change.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • And alsolso the Church shouldn't put any word about, it because the issues roundconcerning the gift (dono) of life were made before the medicine gethas reached to the point where we are nowadays, and the thingsof advancement as where it is nowadays, and things continually change.
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    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
    • Therefore if the are good motifs to stay a living person, it's just to try if there possibilities, if not (otherwise, or else) nothing.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Therefore, if there are good motifs to stay a living personkeep a person living, it's just to try if there possibilities, if not (otherwise, or else) nothing.
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    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10