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- Hy all.
My name is Zara.
I'm 30 years old.
- I'm from Croatia .
- My primary idea for visiting this site is for improving my english skills.
I'm looking for somebody who wants to talk with me and correct me when it's needed.
I want to improve my grammar and vocabulary. :)

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- Hy all.
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- ~~Hy all.~~much better if you will say,,¶HeLLO EVERYONE!
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- H~~y all.~~i Everyone,
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câu 1
- My name is Zara.
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câu 2
- I'm 30 years old.
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- I'm from Croatia .
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- I'm from Croatia .
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- My primary idea for visiting this site is for improving my english skills.
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- My ~~primary idea~~main reason for visiting this site is ~~for~~to improv~~ing~~e my english skills.
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câu 5
- I'm looking for somebody who wants to talk with me and correct me when it's needed.
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câu 6
- I want to improve my grammar and vocabulary. :)
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