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- Hy all.
My name is Zara.
I'm 30 years old.
- I'm from Croatia .
- My primary idea for visiting this site is for improving my english skills.
I'm looking for somebody who wants to talk with me and correct me when it's needed.
I want to improve my grammar and vocabulary. :)

ZaraLooMarch 2014Undi sekarang!
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MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

Title
- Hy all.
  Undi sekarang!
- ~~Hy all.~~much better if you will say,,¶HeLLO EVERYONE!
  drigz19 Ulasan
  
  Report as spam?
- H~~y all.~~i Everyone,
  I_Am_Chappers_21 Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- My name is Zara.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I'm 30 years old.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I'm from Croatia .
  Undi sekarang!
- I'm from Croatia .
  genzaimu Ulasan
  
  Report as spam?
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- My primary idea for visiting this site is for improving my english skills.
  Undi sekarang!
- My ~~primary idea~~main reason for visiting this site is ~~for~~to improv~~ing~~e my english skills.
  I_Am_Chappers_21 Ulasan
  
  Report as spam?
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
Ayat 5
- I'm looking for somebody who wants to talk with me and correct me when it's needed.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5
Ayat 6
- I want to improve my grammar and vocabulary. :)
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6