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    • Barcelona, the world’s largest trade show and a glimpse of some

    • More than 75,000 gadget-wielding mobile industry specialists have descended on Barcelona for the world’s largest trade show and a glimpse of some of the technology that will be hitting the market this year.
    • The Mobile World Congress has grown alongside the industry that it promotes and this year will launch products well beyond the mobile phone.
    • The first novelty is presented is a Smart-watch from Sony.
    • It’s intelligent high-tech watch Provides access to several functions of your mobile via a small touchscreen”” The Smart Watch is an interface for your smart phone much more convenient than the phone itself.
    • The imagined by Sony in addition to being a high-tech gadget watch has a very sleek design that makes a real watch "jewel".
    • During the show Facebook has announced the acquisition of the popular messaging application for mobile WhatsApp.
    • The company of Mark Zuckerberg signed to acquire the platform instant discussion and paid $ 19 billion In order to retain its users and win new.
    • Anyway, WhatsApp was established in 2009 by two former Yahoo employees, said on his blog that it retains its independence and that "nothing" will change for users.
    • WhatsApp derives the majority of its profits, not advertising, but the purchase of the app and its annual subscription of 99 cents each.
    • Eclipsing even with early heat release of the new smartphone Samsung Galaxy S5 of the event, the business of money-and Facebook shares reflects a structural shift in the mobile Internet and related technology industries.
  • Samsung had something to prove with its latest flagship phone, the Galaxy S5, which was unveiled this week at the Mobile World Congress in Barcelona.
  • The Korean company has publicly stated its dissatisfaction with the sales performance of the S4, launched last year, despite the phone maintaining Samsung’s status as the world’s largest phone maker.

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    • More than 75,000 gadget-wielding mobile industry specialists have descended on Barcelona for the world’s largest trade show and a glimpse of some of the technology that will be hitting the market this year.
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    • More than 75,000 gadget-wielding mobile industry specialists have descended on Barcelona for the world’s largest trade show andto get a glimpse of some of the technology that will be hitting the market this year.
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    • The Mobile World Congress has grown alongside the industry that it promotes and this year will launch products well beyond the mobile phone.
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    • The Mobile World Congress has grown alongside the industry that it promotes, and this year will mark the launch of products well beyond the mobile phone.
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    • It’s intelligent high-tech watch Provides access to several functions of your mobile via a small touchscreen”” The Smart Watch is an interface for your smart phone much more convenient than the phone itself.
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    • It’s intelligent, high-tech watch ¶Pprovides access to several functions of your mobile via a small touch screen””.¶The Ssmart Wwatch is an interface for your smart phone which is much more convenient than the phone itself.
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    • The imagined by Sony in addition to being a high-tech gadget watch has a very sleek design that makes a real watch "jewel".
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    • The imaginedcreation by Sony, in addition to being a high-tech gadget watch, has a very sleek design that makes a real watch "it an attractive piece of jewel"lery.
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    • The company of Mark Zuckerberg signed to acquire the platform instant discussion and paid $ 19 billion In order to retain its users and win new.
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    • The company of Mark Zuckerberg signed toff acquiresition of the platform instantafter a short (?) discussion, and paid $ 19 billion Iin order to retain its users and win new ones.
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    • Anyway, WhatsApp was established in 2009 by two former Yahoo employees, said on his blog that it retains its independence and that "nothing" will change for users.
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    • Anyway, WhatsApp was established in 2009 by two former Yahoo employees, said on his blog. In Mark Zuckerberg's blog he says that it retains its independence and that "'nothing"' will change for users.
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    • WhatsApp derives the majority of its profits, not advertising, but the purchase of the app and its annual subscription of 99 cents each.
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    • Eclipsing even with early heat release of the new smartphone Samsung Galaxy S5 of the event, the business of money-and Facebook shares reflects a structural shift in the mobile Internet and related technology industries.
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    • Eclipsing even withe early heat release of the new smart phone Samsung Galaxy S5 ofat the event, the business of money- and Facebook shares, reflects a structural shift in the mobile, Internet, and related technology industries.
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    • Samsung had something to prove with its latest flagship phone, the Galaxy S5, which was unveiled this week at the Mobile World Congress in Barcelona.
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    • The Korean company has publicly stated its dissatisfaction with the sales performance of the S4, launched last year, despite the phone maintaining Samsung’s status as the world’s largest phone maker.
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