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    • formal letter (a customer wants his money back in full)

    • Dear Mr Smith I am writing to express my apologies for the service you received during a recent skiing holiday with our company.
    • I feel sorry you considered our service properly not good and your last skiing holiday not enjoyable.
    • I would like to remind you that our policy does not allow us to refund your holiday in full, but I suggest we give you another proposal unless you hear to the contrary.
    • I propose to you a 4-star family-run hotel where you would have the oppportunity to take advantage of various activities including skiing for a one-week holiday.
    • This skiing holiday will be in a well-known skiing track near the Alps in France.
    • Our company is grateful to you for your confidence and faithfullness, and look forward to offer you this trip for only £675.45.
    • If you are interested in this proposal, I will be pleased to send you full details of it.
    • If not, it seems only fait that our company should refund you only 17% of your money.
    • Hoping you will find the above suggestions of use to you.
  • Yours sincerely.

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