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  • Starbuck's

    • The presentation that I liked the most was this about Starbuck’s.
    • In fact, I am a habitual consumer of Starbuck’s products.
    • I like this brand but I was never questioned myself about what do the success of the brand.
    • For example, I was never seeing that the Starbuck’s logo was a siren.
    • I think when we like brand it is interesting to know more information about origin of the brand like the fact that the first Starbuck’s was create in Seattle.
    • Moreover, during the presentation I learned that Starbuck’s have more success in Asian country than in European country, because Starbuck's look like more European culture than Asian culture.
    • So there is more concurrence for Starbuck’s with other similar European firms (such as “Pomme de pain”, “Casse-Croute”, etc…) While, Starbuck’s is almost a monopole in Asian country and get more success over there.
    • I was never thinking about all this information until this presentation.
  • I finally see Starbuck’s with new eyes.

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    • I think when we like brand it is interesting to know more information about origin of the brand like the fact that the first Starbuck’s was create in Seattle.
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    • I think when we like a brand it is interesting to know more information about the origin of the brand like the fact that thand about facts like first Starbuck’s wasbeing created in Seattle.
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    • Moreover, during the presentation I learned that Starbuck’s have more success in Asian country than in European country, because Starbuck's look like more European culture than Asian culture.
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    • Moreover, during the presentation I learned that Starbuck’s haved more success in Asian countryies than in European countryies, because Starbuck's looked like more European culturerather than Asian culture.
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    • So there is more concurrence for Starbuck’s with other similar European firms (such as “Pomme de pain”, “Casse-Croute”, etc…) While, Starbuck’s is almost a monopole in Asian country and get more success over there.
      투표하세요!
    • So there is more concurrencempetition for Starbuck’s to face with other similar European firmbrands (such as “Pomme de pain”, “Casse-Croute”, etc…) W, while, Starbuck’s is almost a monopole in Asian countryies and get more success over there.
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