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  • Positivity

    • I sometimes find myself having strong crisis of deep and inspirational reflexion, and the one that struck me today made me wonder how I could, here, be helpful to the world.
    • And this is the answer that knocked on the doors of my mind: I want to contribute to make the world more positive. That’s it.
    • And I’ve found my way to do it: by spreading positivity wherever I go :D I think it will be my watchword from now on.
    • The worlds seriously lacks of positivity, in my opinion… I am sure that I can even sometimes become irritating since I’m always trying to see the good side of everything.
    • But even so, I think it’s a battle worth fighting.
    • It hasn’t been a long time since I finally understood that complaining was completely useless and that seeing everything black had no other effect than attracting even more black things.
  • I know that life isn’t always easy, but I promise you that searching for what is positive in everything makes it much more beautiful.
    • My point is that every problem comes to us for a good reason: to make us progress.
    • And against every problem, we have to options: to resign, complain and turn the problem into an actual part of our life, or believe in the future, be positive and look for with the problem teaches us.
  • It’s up to you… If you go for the second option, welcome to my world!
  • A life lived this way is a constant apprenticeship and an evolution toward a future that becomes brighter every day.
    • And today I feel like sharing with you some tips to spread positivity all around you, please people and, who knows, maybe even make someone’s day a little better.
    • Because it’s pleasant to do something without waiting for anything in return, something as nice for the person who does it as it is for the one who gets it.
  • So now it’s up to you!
  • Smile, let life lead you and make the world brighter around you.
  • How to spread sunshine on your way: - Tell someone that you love them.
  • Just like this, because it’s always pleasant to say and to hear, even more when we don’t expect it.
  • - Smile to someone in the street.
  • A smile is a powerful weapon, an amazing present and a perfect way to cheer someone (or even yourself) up.
    • There are too many gray faces in the streets; a smile is never too much.
  • - Tell a compliment to someone.
    • We don’t usually think about it, but an honest compliment can change a lot for the person who gets it.
  • - Give a coin to a street performer or a beggar.
    • In my opinion, if an artist in the street makes us laugh, stop or even dance a few steps, we own him a buck, the acknowledgment for his work.
    • And the few cents you give to a beggar won’t change much for you but I think that they can be important for them.
  • - Write a love letter to the people you love.
  • Saying “I love you” also means transmitting a fantastic energy that comforts and heals.
  • They are words that we don’t often dare to say, but sometimes it’s good to let feelings talk and spread that great energy of love.
  • - Buy a flower and give it to the first person you meet who seems sad.
    • I think that this can change something for this person, and their reaction will be precious and a great memory.
    • It’s pleasant to please someone.
    • - Try to get back being in touch with someone you haven’t talked to for a long time.
    • A little message, not much, only to say “I haven’t forgotten you” - Offer your help to someone - Write a nice comment on Internet.
  • I know what I’m talking about, positive comments can often make someone’s day ;) That’s it for today.
  • I hope that this little touch of positivity will be useful ;) Don’t forget to see the good side in everything and don’t let problems cover the beauty in life.
  • And don’t forget: Spread happiness!
  • It’s the best hobby ever  P.S : This article sounds much more philosophical in English, sorry...

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  • câu 1
    • I sometimes find myself having strong crisis of deep and inspirational reflexion, and the one that struck me today made me wonder how I could, here, be helpful to the world.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I sometimes find myself having strong crisis' of deep and inspirational reflexction, and ts. The one that struck me today made me wonder how I could, here, be helpful to the world.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
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    • And this is the answer that knocked on the doors of my mind: I want to contribute to make the world more positive. That’s it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • And this is tThe answer that knocked on the doors of my mind: was I want to contribute to makeing the world more positive. That’s it.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
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    • And I’ve found my way to do it: by spreading positivity wherever I go :D I think it will be my watchword from now on.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • And I’ve found my way to do it:, by spreading positivity wherever I go :D I think it will be my watchword from now on.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • The worlds seriously lacks of positivity, in my opinion… I am sure that I can even sometimes become irritating since I’m always trying to see the good side of everything.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • TIn my opinion the worlds seriously lacks of positivity, in my opinion…. I am sure that I can even sometimes become irritatinged since I’m always trying to see the good side of everything.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • It hasn’t been a long time since I finally understood that complaining was completely useless and that seeing everything black had no other effect than attracting even more black things.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It hasn’t been a long time since I finally understood that complaining was completely useless and that seeing everything blacknegatively had no other effect than attracting even more blacknegative things.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
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    • I know that life isn’t always easy, but I promise you that searching for what is positive in everything makes it much more beautiful.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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    • And against every problem, we have to options: to resign, complain and turn the problem into an actual part of our life, or believe in the future, be positive and look for with the problem teaches us.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • And againstWith every problem, we have two options: to resign, complain and turn the problem into an actual part of our life, or believe in the future, be positive and look for with the problem teaches us.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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    • A life lived this way is a constant apprenticeship and an evolution toward a future that becomes brighter every day.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
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    • And today I feel like sharing with you some tips to spread positivity all around you, please people and, who knows, maybe even make someone’s day a little better.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • And tToday I feel like sharing with you some tips to spread positivity all around you, please people and, who knows, m? Maybe even make someone’s day a little better.,
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
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    • Because it’s pleasant to do something without waiting for anything in return, something as nice for the person who does it as it is for the one who gets it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Bbecause it’s pleasant to do something without waiting for anything in return, something as nice for the person who does it as it is for the one who gets it.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
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    • A smile is a powerful weapon, an amazing present and a perfect way to cheer someone (or even yourself) up.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19
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    • In my opinion, if an artist in the street makes us laugh, stop or even dance a few steps, we own him a buck, the acknowledgment for his work.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Int is my opinion, if that an artist in the street who makes us laugh, stop or even dance a few steps, then we own him a buck, the as acknowledgment for his work.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 24ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 24
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    • And the few cents you give to a beggar won’t change much for you but I think that they can be important for them.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • And tThe few cents you give to a beggar won’t change much for you but I think that they can be important for them.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 25ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 25
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    • They are words that we don’t often dare to say, but sometimes it’s good to let feelings talk and spread that great energy of love.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 28ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 28
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    • I think that this can change something for this person, and their reaction will be precious and a great memory.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I think that this can change something for this person, and their reaction will be precious and provide a great memory.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 30ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 30
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    • A little message, not much, only to say “I haven’t forgotten you” - Offer your help to someone - Write a nice comment on Internet.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • A littleWrite a short message, not much,too long: only to say “I haven’t forgotten you”¶- Offer your help to someone¶- Write a nice comment on the Internet.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 33ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 33
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    • I know what I’m talking about, positive comments can often make someone’s day ;) That’s it for today.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 34ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 34
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    • I hope that this little touch of positivity will be useful ;) Don’t forget to see the good side in everything and don’t let problems cover the beauty in life.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 35ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 35
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