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  • Positivity

    • I sometimes find myself having strong crisis of deep and inspirational reflexion, and the one that struck me today made me wonder how I could, here, be helpful to the world.
    • And this is the answer that knocked on the doors of my mind: I want to contribute to make the world more positive. That’s it.
    • And I’ve found my way to do it: by spreading positivity wherever I go :D I think it will be my watchword from now on.
    • The worlds seriously lacks of positivity, in my opinion… I am sure that I can even sometimes become irritating since I’m always trying to see the good side of everything.
    • But even so, I think it’s a battle worth fighting.
    • It hasn’t been a long time since I finally understood that complaining was completely useless and that seeing everything black had no other effect than attracting even more black things.
  • I know that life isn’t always easy, but I promise you that searching for what is positive in everything makes it much more beautiful.
    • My point is that every problem comes to us for a good reason: to make us progress.
    • And against every problem, we have to options: to resign, complain and turn the problem into an actual part of our life, or believe in the future, be positive and look for with the problem teaches us.
  • It’s up to you… If you go for the second option, welcome to my world!
  • A life lived this way is a constant apprenticeship and an evolution toward a future that becomes brighter every day.
    • And today I feel like sharing with you some tips to spread positivity all around you, please people and, who knows, maybe even make someone’s day a little better.
    • Because it’s pleasant to do something without waiting for anything in return, something as nice for the person who does it as it is for the one who gets it.
  • So now it’s up to you!
  • Smile, let life lead you and make the world brighter around you.
  • How to spread sunshine on your way: - Tell someone that you love them.
  • Just like this, because it’s always pleasant to say and to hear, even more when we don’t expect it.
  • - Smile to someone in the street.
  • A smile is a powerful weapon, an amazing present and a perfect way to cheer someone (or even yourself) up.
    • There are too many gray faces in the streets; a smile is never too much.
  • - Tell a compliment to someone.
    • We don’t usually think about it, but an honest compliment can change a lot for the person who gets it.
  • - Give a coin to a street performer or a beggar.
    • In my opinion, if an artist in the street makes us laugh, stop or even dance a few steps, we own him a buck, the acknowledgment for his work.
    • And the few cents you give to a beggar won’t change much for you but I think that they can be important for them.
  • - Write a love letter to the people you love.
  • Saying “I love you” also means transmitting a fantastic energy that comforts and heals.
  • They are words that we don’t often dare to say, but sometimes it’s good to let feelings talk and spread that great energy of love.
  • - Buy a flower and give it to the first person you meet who seems sad.
    • I think that this can change something for this person, and their reaction will be precious and a great memory.
    • It’s pleasant to please someone.
    • - Try to get back being in touch with someone you haven’t talked to for a long time.
    • A little message, not much, only to say “I haven’t forgotten you” - Offer your help to someone - Write a nice comment on Internet.
  • I know what I’m talking about, positive comments can often make someone’s day ;) That’s it for today.
  • I hope that this little touch of positivity will be useful ;) Don’t forget to see the good side in everything and don’t let problems cover the beauty in life.
  • And don’t forget: Spread happiness!
  • It’s the best hobby ever  P.S : This article sounds much more philosophical in English, sorry...

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