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Văn bản từ CuteAmy - English

  • >>>>>>>>>> H!

  • Now it's time to commence the war of writing.
  • I've taken my sword and ready for the battle.
  • It's an unweidly war which I've already started with a long-bladed weapon and with a burly armor.I haven't got any cumbersome soldiers cause they can exacerbate the initial conditions.
  • As a fledgling warrior it's my responsibilty to make minimum mistakes.Knowing the ropes doesn't mean that you're now perfect on this/that thing .You've to practise untill unless you've got its ABC.It's not a big deal at all.Practise makes a man perfect. Can't do that?
  • Leave it if you're an underdog.May be you lose your target first time but always remember you can't proceed further if you've haven't got any lessons from your mistakes.Don't be deprived with what you have .
    • Always remember You're one of a kind.

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    • It's an unweidly war which I've already started with a long-bladed weapon and with a burly armor.I haven't got any cumbersome soldiers cause they can exacerbate the initial conditions.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • As a fledgling warrior it's my responsibilty to make minimum mistakes.Knowing the ropes doesn't mean that you're now perfect on this/that thing .You've to practise untill unless you've got its ABC.It's not a big deal at all.Practise makes a man perfect. Can't do that?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • Leave it if you're an underdog.May be you lose your target first time but always remember you can't proceed further if you've haven't got any lessons from your mistakes.Don't be deprived with what you have .
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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