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  • >>>>>>>>>> H!

  • Now it's time to commence the war of writing.
  • I've taken my sword and ready for the battle.
  • It's an unweidly war which I've already started with a long-bladed weapon and with a burly armor.I haven't got any cumbersome soldiers cause they can exacerbate the initial conditions.
  • As a fledgling warrior it's my responsibilty to make minimum mistakes.Knowing the ropes doesn't mean that you're now perfect on this/that thing .You've to practise untill unless you've got its ABC.It's not a big deal at all.Practise makes a man perfect. Can't do that?
  • Leave it if you're an underdog.May be you lose your target first time but always remember you can't proceed further if you've haven't got any lessons from your mistakes.Don't be deprived with what you have .
    • Always remember You're one of a kind.

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    • It's an unweidly war which I've already started with a long-bladed weapon and with a burly armor.I haven't got any cumbersome soldiers cause they can exacerbate the initial conditions.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
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    • As a fledgling warrior it's my responsibilty to make minimum mistakes.Knowing the ropes doesn't mean that you're now perfect on this/that thing .You've to practise untill unless you've got its ABC.It's not a big deal at all.Practise makes a man perfect. Can't do that?
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
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    • Leave it if you're an underdog.May be you lose your target first time but always remember you can't proceed further if you've haven't got any lessons from your mistakes.Don't be deprived with what you have .
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
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